Hello, folks!
School is going quite swimmingly so far. Hooray! The best parts of my day today were mostly sightings.
1. The Ms. PoPo sighting, which occurred before lunch. (In her natural habitat - the classroom!)
2. The House/EZ sighting, which occurred before ninth period. (awwww)
3. I sighted a Carrie after school today!! She was kind of far away and I'm not sure if she sighted me too, but the moment definitely brightened my day. Hooray!! Since I have no time, today's entertainment will be a dive into the past. I'm going to go through the oldest documents in my "Virgil" folder and show them to you here. (It's actually titled as my real name, since I've been using it since I was like eight. I wasn't called Virgil back then...)
Okay. Ready? *clicks "sort by date modified," scrolls all the way down*
Oldest Document: Titled "Feelings" - Date last modified: June 8, 2005 (I was eight years old.)
This document is comprised of not words, but pictures, more specifically the crappy shapes which can be found on Word 2003, filled with all those lovely "present fill effects." It's got a heart, two stars, a sun, and a moon.
Number 2: Titled "Rainbow" - Date last modified: June 9, 2005
This one is similar to "Feelings," above. My feelings are a rainbow. This must mean something.
Number 3: Titled "Beauty" - Date last modified: August 29, 2005 (I'm nine now!!!)
This one is basically the same as the other two. Again, mostly hearts, stars, and suns, filled with wonderful fill effects.
Number 4: Titled "[Virgil's] Favorites" - Date last modified: January 4, 2006
Quoth:
color-purple
place-Bahamas
food-strawberry
animal-dolphin
movie-Pirates of the Caribbean
holiday-Christmas
Those were the colors and everything. Don't I have such an artistic eye?
Number 5: Title: "stone soup almost final copy" - Date last modified: February 6, 2006
This is going to be the last one, since it's quite long. IT'S BASICALLY NOVEL LENGTH.
I haven't looked at this in years.... I submitted this to the kids' writing magazine, Stone Soup, and it got rejected because I suck at writing. Hehe.
The actual title is "A Crystal in the Darkness" - I hope you enjoy!!
This is going to be the last one, since it's quite long. IT'S BASICALLY NOVEL LENGTH.
I haven't looked at this in years.... I submitted this to the kids' writing magazine, Stone Soup, and it got rejected because I suck at writing. Hehe.
The actual title is "A Crystal in the Darkness" - I hope you enjoy!!
Oh god I can't believe I'm putting this on the internet.
Here it goes....(Since it's absolutely NOVEL LENGTH, I put in a page break.)
(Just think about this for a moment. You're about to enter the mind of nine-year-old-Virgil. I haven't changed anything in the writing since 2006. O.o )
(Consider yourselves lucky)
(This'll be like a collectors' item someday)
Hang on. Hang on. Hang on.” She was wondering if it was even worth the effort.
Gabriel Lily Robin, better known as Gabby, was lost at sea. Her little dinghy, named
“June” after her grandmother, was long since floating. There were no life
jackets on the little boat, and all poor Gabby had was a float-wood barrel on
which she was clinging for dear life.
Why hadn’t she listened to her mother before she left the
dock at dusk? She had no idea. Gabby had simply planned to circle around Palm Tree
Bay, but then a violent storm suddenly brewed and sent her boat off course. She
was a skilled sailor, yet nothing
could have prepared her for this. Now she was floating aimlessly with no sight
of shore.
Suddenly, she saw something in the distance! Her cold legs
clumsily paddled towards what looked like a small island. It was very small,
only just big enough for a man to set up camp. Nevertheless, in the middle of
the Atlantic Ocean, the smallest piece of land means hope. Gabby kicked until
her legs hurt. She realized the tide was almost with her, so she floated slowly
forward.
Once she got closer to the island, she was starting to
see it a lot better. It was very small indeed, about as big as her bedroom back
home. It had a simple palm tree in the middle. Although it was tiny, the tide
was in and when it went out, the isle would be bigger. Yet to her, it was an
oasis.
Gabby beached herself on shore. It was still late spring
at the time, and the weather was warm. Yet the water was cold. She wrapped her
cloak around her legs. She looked out into the beyond. Nothing was there now
except the gently rolling waves of the big blue ocean.
Then without warning, a fin appeared out of the water,
disturbing the calm atmosphere. Then another one and another.
“Sharks!” was
the first word that came to Gabby’s mind. Her heart raced. Her blood turned to
ice and she was petrified by fear.
The three fins glided towards her. Then the heads of the
creatures slowly arose out of the water and rested on the edge of the isle that
Gabby lay on. They were not sharks, they were dolphins!
Although Gabby had heard stories about dolphins saving
stranded humans from certain death, she was very doubtful that these ones were
here to rescue her. They seemed to read her mind and appeared to attempt to
gain her trust. Hesitantly, she wrapped her hands around the fin of the first
dolphin.
“I shall name you
Crystal,” Gabby said aloud. Then the most amazing thing happened. So
astonishing it just had to be written
in a story.
“I like that name,” said a voice. It was not Gabby who
said it, however. The speaker was none other than Crystal herself. Gabby gasped
and backed away slowly. She pinched herself, but nothing was different except for
the small red mark.
Although Gabby was twelve years old and quite mature for
her age, she was very thin and had pale skin that made the pinch mark stand
out. She blinked and rubbed her tired eyes, yet the vision of the talking
dolphin still remained. She sat there bug eyed for what seemed like hours until
Crystal spoke again.
“Do not be afraid dear child, for I mean no harm. Hold
onto my fin and I shall take you home to safety.” Her words flowed through
Gabby like a river, her ears the stream and her heart the lake. She knew that
was the truth, for those words were like a song whose notes are as pure as a
sunrise in winter. They gave her hope. They gave her courage, and she was no
longer afraid.
“Crystal, Crystal, Crystal,” murmured Gabby as she nodded
her cold head in agreement. She held Crystal’s beautiful fin and off they went!
Gabby felt as if she was skimming atop of the blue water, and when she came to
her senses, she really was!
“Wow! I never thought being lost would be so… fun!”
exclaimed Gabby.
“You
are not lost, Gabby. You are found,” said Crystal. Gabby was still not used to
talking dolphins, yet something else surprised her even more than that.
“How
do you know my name?” she asked.
“Just
like you know ours,” said the dolphin to the right of Crystal.
“So,
you are Sapphire, and you are Turquoise,” Gabby responded, confused how she knew
that and absolutely astounded.
“Exactly,”
said Sapphire.
Gabby
tried pinching herself again, but this was real. What was more, it was
happening to her!
“How long can you hold your breath?” asked
Crystal.
“I
don’t know,” Gabby replied, “maybe about thirty seconds.” She wasn’t sure what
Crystal was getting at, yet the amazing dolphin had earned her trust.
“That’ll
be just enough,” said Crystal. Gabby could have sworn she saw a twinkle in the
dolphin’s mysterious cloudy-gray eyes. “Ready?”
“For
what?”
“Just
hold your breath.” Suddenly, Crystal dove into the murky water, jerking Gabby
forward. Turquoise and Sapphire were rushing after them. Gabby heard their slender
tails slapping the water as her view of the underwater landscape grew clearer.
There was a beautiful coral reef hidden within the bright green sea grass!
Different shades of pink, yellow, purple, and all colors imaginable appeared on
the surface of sparkling coral.
Crystal darted for the reef heading straight for a
cluster of vibrant orange coral. It parted, as if sensing their presence,
unveiling a cave. The cave was made of shining gold, embedded with gleaming
rainbow jewels that sparkled randomly. It was truly and will always be the most
fantastic thing humble Gabby had ever seen.
Then,
out of the blue, (literally) a figure emerged from the shadows at the mouth of
the glorious cave. Gabby couldn’t quite make out who or what it could possibly
be. However, that was before it came into view. It had a long flowing tail with
indigo scales that shimmered in the sunlight reflected off the sparkling jewels
and gold. Small patches of fiery red scales were slid in between the blue ones.
The bottom of the spectacular tail was a violet flipper lined with gold and
silver. The body was smooth, slim and cream colored. On top of it was a sparkly
magenta cami that was waving in the soft current. The creature had a rather
big, round face with the most gorgeous blue eyes. Its golden blonde hair had
bright red highlights and it wore a lemon yellow headband that was decorated
with the most stunning rubies. And yes, it was nothing less than a half human
half fish, mermaid.
“Hello, Ruby,” said Turquoise. She cocked her
head towards Gabby, who was twirling her brown hair nervously. The mermaid, or
“Ruby” nodded, and glided over to the anxious girl. Ruby took something from a
reed basket. It was a shell necklace made out of red and pink shells and pieces
of purple coral. She put it over Gabby’s head.
By
now, Gabby’s lungs were bursting, and she felt she would crack any moment.
“It’s
okay,” Ruby gently whispered. “You can breathe.” Gabby was very relieved and
let out a big sigh. Yet she didn’t quite understand. How was she breathing?
Then she realized it. The necklace was allowing her to breathe underwater!
“Wow!”
Gabby thought in amazement.
“Come with me,” said Ruby as she led them into
the cave. Suddenly, rows of dried seaweed lamps lit up! The inside of the cave
was almost as decorative as the outside, if not even more. Diamonds glittered
on a marble surface with dozens of tiny emeralds lining the ceiling! A crimson
red rug woven of tropical sea grass covered the floor wall to wall. The cave
stretched for quite a long way, with many hallways of various colors connected
to it like a chipmunk’s burrow. Ruby then guided the trio of dolphins (and one
Gabby) to one of the rooms that joined with the front hall. It had violet and
aqua green swirled gemstones all over the walls and a black opal decorated
chandelier hanging from the silver ceiling. In it was a remarkably clean set of
chairs carved from the finest rose quartz and topped with soft pink pillows
studded with red and blue rhinestones.
“What
a room!” exclaimed wide-eyed Gabby.
“Thank
you, Gabby,” said Ruby.
“Okay,
how do you know my name?”
“Sapphire
told me.”
“Oh.”
“Come
along, there is so much to do before we can get you back to your home.”
“Home,”
Gabby repeated the word several times to herself. “Home.” So they were going to help her, at least try
anyway.
“Here
we are!” said Ruby as she opened a jewel encrusted door. In gold letters, the
words “Potion Room” were printed on the silver handle. This room was a dark
shade of blue all over, though Gabby hardly noticed it. Most of the wall was covered
in stone shelves, glistening with dozens of strange jars and bottles that
looked like they contained a valuable magic of some sort. Yet the most amazing
thing in the curious room was the ebony black cauldron propped up smack in the
middle! It had many sparkling rubies lining the outer rim. Gabby wasn’t sure if this was very safe. She
looked back to see Crystal nodding and that made her feel much better. Ruby
gracefully glided over to a shelf and picked up a lime green jar that was
labeled “Transportation Potion”.
Gabby
was puzzled. Was Ruby going to transport her home? Or was she going to use it
for a different purpose? It was truly a mystery, and Gabby was afraid to ask.
Then Ruby took the potion and poured every drop of it into the cauldron. It
immediately began to bubble and fizz! Ruby then picked up a bottle filled with
golden nuggets. It was labeled “Wishing Stones”. She plopped one, two, three
into the cauldron. It suddenly flashed a rainbow of light all over the room,
cascading over everything within sight! Gabby was the only one in the room who
was startled by this. Yet it ceased as soon as it started. Ruby also threw in a
pinch of sparkly dust that came out of a little bag labeled “Ground Sea Serpent
Scales”. A huge green cloud of foul- smelling smoke surrounded everybody in the
room! As it slowly lifted, Gabby started to think. Was her mother missing her terribly?
Was her father out searching? Was her baby brother, Nathan crying for her?
“Am
I going home now?” Gabby asked Crystal.
“All
in good time,” she softly replied.
Meanwhile, Ruby was getting something else
from a cupboard. It was a small, blue bottle that looked like it was over a
century old. This one was labeled, “Shark Teeth”.
“Yuck!”
Gabby thought, visions of sharks’ bloody mouths dancing in her head. Ruby
poured a handful of it into the cauldron. Just as she did this, the now
purplish liquid bubbled up to enormous heights! However, it quieted after a
minute or two.
“Fantastic. Just fantastic,” remarked
Gabby, green eyes filled with wonder and amazement.
“What?
Oh yes it is fantastic,” replied Ruby. It sounded as if she had never had
someone compliment her skilled sorcery before. “Brace yourself, for it is
time.”
“For
what? Send me home? What is it Ruby?” asked Gabby, now more curious than ever.
“Let’s just say, you are going for a …
little ride,” she answered, her mysterious blue eyes dancing.
“Before
you go, we were meaning to give you something,” said Crystal. “so that you will
remember us, always.” She picked up a small blue bag hanging from her fin that
Gabby had not noticed until that moment, and gave it to her. Gabby slowly
untied the thin cord that was holding it closed. Inside, there was a little
round box that was covered in soft, red velvet and decorated with exotic
shells. As she opened it, she saw four gems gleaming inside. One was a little round turquoise. One
was a sparkly sapphire. One was a small, cleanly cut ruby. And in the middle, there
was a big dazzling crystal that shone rainbows out of one side of it. The whole
box was simply stunning. She closed the box and put it back in the bag.
Before Gabby could even say thank you, Ruby
started chanting in another language, waving her thin arms over the cauldron. It
went on and on, for minutes, maybe an eternity. Gabby couldn’t keep track.
“Ready?” Ruby said. Gabby gulped and nodded hesitantly. “Okay then,” the
mermaid continued… “Kaopasia!”
At
first, Gabby thought the potion hadn’t worked after all and they would have to
start all over again, and she really didn’t mind that much. She actually found
it all quite fascinating. Yet Ruby seemed content with her work. But why? Then Gabby
figured it out. Right then and there. She was levitating, right on the spot.
Gabby was slowly floating uncontrollably across the room, until she was
hovering right over the strange, bubbling cauldron.
“Goodbye,
friend,” Crystal called. The stunned girl opened her mouth, but no reply came. Suddenly,
Gabby fell straight into the murky cauldron! A tornado of colors surrounded
her. Vivid images passed through her mind, images of mermaids, dolphins and
caves. The voices of her friends sounded very distant. The colors swirled
around her rapidly, overwhelming her. Then, it stopped. Gabby found herself
going into a very deep sleep…
Gabby’s
eyes fluttered open. She wasn’t in the mermaid cave anymore. She was in “June”!
And not only that, she was no more than one hundred yards away from shore!
Although she wanted to get home as soon as possible, her dinghy was still broken.
Gabby dove into the water and swam with all of her might. Once on shore, she
ran towards her house, a small brick building by the pier. Thankfully, the
front door was open.
“Phew,” she quietly said to herself. Gabby
pushed the door open and it slammed behind her. She sprinted up the stairs,
headed for her room. Halfway up, she bumped into her mother!
“What
in the… It, it’s you! Oh honey, you’re back!” (Right here she smothered her
daughter in kisses.) “I missed you so much! I simply must go tell your father. Isaac! Isaac!” she set off rushing down
the stairs. Meanwhile, Gabby continued up. She stepped into her tiny room and
sat down on her bed. Had it really happened? Had she really just done that?
Gabby rummaged in her cloak pocket. There it was. The little shell box with the
four little stones.
“Crystal,”
she murmured softly. She heard voices downstairs.
“What
is it, Martha?” Gabby heard her father’s booming voice echo in the hall. She
quickly hid the box in the blanket. Just then, both of her parents ran into her
room, and she was once again smothered in kisses. Her father was carrying
beaming Nathan on his strong shoulders.
“Gabriel, how did you get back? We saw your
boat in the bay just before the storm hit,” her father said. (Only her parents
called her “Gabriel”.)
Gabby
simply smiled her sweetest, most innocent smile and replied, “A crystal in the
darkness.”Best wishes!
Virgil
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d'awwww...little Virgil, the writing prodigy.It's such an adorable and little kid's dream story! I can't believe Stone Soup didn't accept it :(
ReplyDeleteDo not fear, I have printed this out, saved a copy on my computer, and sent an email of this to myself. I shall be rich, upon selling this when you become famous :D
yay.
I love having friends that you know will be famous in the future, and I have all these anecdotes and past drawings/writings and signatures that I can sell in the future. So I'll be rich!!! :D
LITTLE VIRGIL WAS SO ADORABLE. <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteThat story was beautiful. And grammatically correct too, which is more than you can say for some teen writers. . .
We need to do another 'when we were young' theme week.
We should!!! We should also include pictures this time. I think I might have some of Lynda and xiy from waaaay back in the day...
ReplyDeleteAgreed to all of the above. Virgil, honestly, it reminded me a bit of Abarat. Which, I will mention, is a published and fairly well-liked book. I'm sure your writing has only improved from there! Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeletehahaha I love this, virgil :)
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